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He said he would stop. Lies
A six word story that I wrote in my chemestry class.. Really excited about writting more of them :D
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Dead-Genre-Revival Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
These are very interesting. I've got quite a few micro-fiction and flash fiction stories I'm writing for my new site.

My only concern with shorter works (sws) is that they run the risk of being captions without pictures.

It's an interesting thing. I wish I could post pictures here... hmmm I don't have a link handy. Look on my facebook wall there is a picture with a 2 word story "The End" It works very well--but you need to see the picture.

BTW my facebook name is fookleyur
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Tasa94 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Student General Artist
I saw the picture and it can work well.Depends how you interpreted the story. Thats what i love with sws is that they pull you in. They give you just a small amount off information and everything else is to the reader.
Thank you for the kind words.
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a wonderful six-word story. Despite the simplicity of these types of stories, it attests to your skill as a writer to be able to create such emotion and power in so few words. Wonderful work. :clap:
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Tasa94 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :D
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CrematedMan Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student Writer
Please do: The best I've heard "For sale. Baby shoes. Never worn."
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Tasa94 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student General Artist
I dont understand ....
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CrematedMan Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
Keep creating.
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Tasa94 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh :D
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roamingtigress Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
Right to the point! Good work.
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Tasa94 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :D
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roamingtigress Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
You are very welcome :)
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beatupbutterfly Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I would consider this more poetry than prose. It has a rhythm to it.
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Angiepureheart Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
6 words, 6 seconds, 100 feelings...
cool!
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Tasa94 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student General Artist
I know I love how 6 words can make an amazing piece.Its not quantity but quality.
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Angiepureheart Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
and the title also fits, it makes your imagination running for miles!
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Tasa94 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :D
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
another short tale... very nice, althought saying it, seems cruel too
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Tasa94 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Student General Artist
It is suppose to be cruel..It was cruel experiencing it too...
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
that's a shame... I'm sorry for you or the person that experience that
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Tasa94 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you....
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
you're welcome... always
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Snowmanofdoom Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Extra :D
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Tasa94 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Hvala :D I tvoja je extra... razmisljam sad da zamenim naslov u unnecessary cruelty sta mislis ?
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Snowmanofdoom Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
idk, dopada mi se ovaj :)
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